About this submission
Called together for their youngest sister’s final days, the Gibson siblings reluctantly return to their childhood home after a decade apart.
COLLAB COMMUNITY QUESTIONS:
What do you find attractive about this story?
What do you find confusing or boring to read?
Who do you believe the protagonist to be? The antagonist?
Would these first twenty pages make you want to finish the script? Why or why not?What would you do to improve upon it?